Jormungandr

Nice start there for a vampire story. Also dig the dialogue, what bothers me though is the er.. child factor in this.

Yeah but please post a bit less in a row, you're nuking the whole Blog feed.

Ahhhh! Why did you have to stop it there! Very excellent work, I was really into this one.

I knew you would say that! I did that on purpose though, things would be a bit too fast otherwise.

Excellent storyline! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you, i'm always happy to elate people to my weird imaginations.

The great evil. I can't imagine what or who that might be so far. You got a core point there that interests me the most now.

And there it is! The wheels began to spin! Right into my face! Excellent. Judging from her memory of her father being less tall i'll assume Alania is a half-giant.

This is getting good, really good.

I dig the idea so far with the mystery of where Alania comes from and the giants are a total plus on the creative side. Waiting for the part where it all starts to unwind a bit now.

And that's the point where it just got intriguing. Giants and magic? Hmm, we'll see.

Now that's unique so far for stories here. A girl getting raised by giants. Kudos for creativity to you chief.

Great start to get into the first two characters of the story. Now, i'm gonna have a look at the other 4 current chapters.

So much intrigue and betrayal, i love it!

Surprised to see Sheogorath, i do hope he takes on a more major roles instead of being just some person in Elisifs dreams.

Hmmm, very intriguing. I'm looking forward to see Kiva in real action.

What a twist. Somewhat. I mean..what, a twist?

 

Also, I'll send that napalm bomb to your inbox, like always.

*Chews on the bomb* Hmm spicy flavor this one, brings fire into the bones, quite literally! *combusts*

I like it! I felt really bad for Skana when she was ripped from Yifa. Good job

I have to admit, i almost shed a tear myself while i was writing it. Let's hope for the best here for Skana.

So now Jyggalag has entered the fray. This is one really awesome story!

Thank you very much!

Let's hope perfect order will never happen for Mundus.

Have to say, i would've expected Kiva to conduct some experiments on Stentor, being into alchemy and all that i'd wager vampire dust would come in handy.

Yes! Yeeees! Make sheogorath appear! It's the only logic thing to do! Mwahahahaha.

And it would be awesome if you continue this.  Perhaps a vacation on the shivering isles?

Has that "events spiral quickly to the inevitable center" feeling now.

I'm sure something big will happen next chapter.

I loved this one. Really waiting to Auronus get his ass kicked.

Believe me he won't go down with a fight.

Can't wait to see that a-hole Auronus get kicked in his, er, A-hole.

 

P.S. Huh, Skana's kind of hot... Wait, does that make me a necrophiliac?

If the fact that she's undead turns you on, as it does me, then yes.

But then again i'm pretty sure i am necrophile to a certain extent.

Reads a bit like an interlude. I kinda like how Kive is keeping Celine stupid, almost mindless, i guess this story won't take a good end for her. Unless Mani has something up his sleeve, but i doubt that since he's in prison with basically nothing but rags.

I wonder what the Keepers intentions are.

What a strong cliffhanger to see Auronus ass whipped in the next chapter.

Come on, do it! Show us how the scum from Meridia dies!

Well, let's see what happens in the next chapter.

I just corrected the writing on the last few images, that was horrible. I shouldn't write stories at 4am without sleep.

So Mani got kind of framed for the assault on the Dragonborn. Now, since Celine is kept as a pet by the Keeper, i wonder how he will get out of this one.

Also i'm extremely interested to see what will Arissa do now. I certainly didn't expect it to turn out for her that way.

The Dragonborn however is still alive isn't he?

No, it's certainly not wrong. Although a lot of people might view this as loss of reality. I say fuck them. There was this one guy in Japan a few years ago who married his virtual wife, no joke.

He said in an interview, if people would stand by their own quirks, the world would be so much more interesting. And i say that man is right.

Gods, this is so wrong, yet so right.

I mean Neloth is like.. propably the only man on Nirn who actually wouldn't have those interests. Unless sex involves magic of the highest degree. But then again, Fire Storms are best left out of the bed room.

That moment when Mani turned into the keeper, i swear i even imagined matching music to it in my head, it's like a horror scene from a movie.

Keep it up! It's awesome!

Also, probs for a female keeper.

Man, where did u get this "assassins creed like" cloak on the right shoulder? oO 

If it's possible, could you send me in PM link on it pls? :3

Send you a pm.

I noticed Skana and Skaadi look very much alike. Is there something to that? 

Nope, only personal preference actually.

Ha! I never thought my morbid imagination would inspire someone else, that means something to me. Thanks.